No.154520
>>154491>>154499>>154493Thanks
What do you think about the paneling? The general flow of it, is it easy to read?
And most importantly, is it erotic enough?
No.154521
>>154520>panelingI think it flows and paces well. Most of the time is spent on the setup. You convey clearly the reactions of the Qn and boy's trepidation. You could say the pacing of the last two spoilered images were rushed by comparison, but I read into it assuming he's just a quickshot and it still flows fine.
>is it erotic enough?Ero/10. You did a good job portraying their body language.
No.154524
>>154520As the other anon says, the build up was good and the release was fast, and the last panel worked very well as nice epilog to the story. Stacked akyuu would also be an amazing thing to see
No.154530
>>154521>>154524Thanks for the responses, I'm testing the waters about something bigger and that was a demo of it.
Yes, the last two images went by quickly because I was already burned out and wanted it to be finished already.
No.154596
Forgive me Kissu Overlords, it's been far too long since I've posted here but I've been trying to lurk around as well.
>>154403Quite fond of this one, good pose and quality expression.
>>154440 also just plain looks pretty, love how expressive all your Okuu's always are.
>>154505 is pretty hot as well...I imagine her having a very sultry voice so I hope that's accurate.
>>154530>the last two images went by quickly because I was already burned outI had a sneaking suspicion that was the case but, like the others have said, it all flows nicely and your attention to detail only helps with the intended execution. The ways you framed certain moments around what the boy was experiencing in real time made it very immersive, moral ambiguity aside.
If this is simply a trial for something greater to come then I can't wait to see what you're cooking. I've been wondering if my style lends itself well to decent eroticism as of late on occasion too but I don't think I've ever seen that issue with your work from where I'm standing.
>>154513Genuinely gorgeous...looks like it could've come straight out of the early 2000s. Wish my linework was even half as delicate.
>>154572Surprisingly cute and clean, imo it works just fine without her hat. The overall commitment to lined paper sketches like this is also fun to see in a way.
No.154639
>>>/megu/2667Satoko but with even more boob massages
No.154668
>>154639I don't think I'll ever read "Satako" and not think of a certain blonde-haired brat.
No.154675
>>154673cute deredere expression
No.154715
>>154714Goddamn 5.5MB of tits. Very nice.
You do commissions? I don't have twitter, you got steam? No.154716
>>154715I do but I am closed atm since I did a shit ton this month, I am tri_x5 on X.
No.154718
>>154673very very cute warm chibi
gives off a certain feeling of tranquil happiness
No.154719
Gift art for a friend, quite proud of what it eventually ended up being.
>>154612A very high honor, thank you...I hope it'll serve you well in time.
>>154673Soft and adorable, it's perfect...
No.154729
>>154715idk why I read that as I have twitter, I am on steam, check the /jp/ fumo group, I run it
No.154730
>>154719Very cute psychedelic Marisa!
No.154732
>>154676Impressive output pace in general and I luv Leviathan.
Kinda hoping you'll thoroughly take up on online drawing course materials from the Japanese; seeing a recognizable artist go into improvement is fun.>>154719Marisa is on shrooms again...
No.154737
>>154732everything I learned from experimentation and looking at other artists works. I would like to get my tools better refined so I can better target what my favorite artists use to achieve their drawings.
No.154762
>>154719Curious bagua arrangement. Why are directions tilted 90 degrees?
Nice drawing, by the way. Reminds me of alison airline's few pieces.
No.154811
Slightly indulgent Yuyumu drawing, been playing around with a lot of different things lately
>>154732Don't do fungus, kids...
>>154730 >>154762Thank you both! Being compared to alison airline feels like a very high honor as a fan, an older Marisa piece of that artist was also a partial inspiration actually.
>Why are directions tilted 90 degrees?Honestly I did not realize that was the case at the time. I was using a panel from SSiB as the reference and just decided to guess how the arrangement started. Thankfully it still works pretty well imo
No.154812
>>154811I really like this style of dithering, it makes the image busy in a way I think is cool
No.154819
File:045.png (Spoiler Image,6.28 MB,1920x2560)
my other OC as a kitsune~
No.154823
File:296.png (Spoiler Image,1.22 MB,1060x1060)
>>154819There's a dedicated NSFW option if you click the spoiler button twice.
Not that you need it. I would not call any of your drawings NSFW, especially compared to what else gets posted here.
No.154827
>>154823I get worried with how big I draw the boobs, which is why I decided to spoiler
No.154869
>>154867SAFETY CAT! Good to see it's still getting referenced. Nice. What do you use to do the pixel/MS paint look with the blockiness?
No.154873
>>154869I use Aseprite, switched from paint because I can save layers with it
always just drawn in tiny resolutions (original is 120x100) because it looked fun
No.154910
Rock is a lady's lack of modesty
>>154867>>154896The creature
No.154911
Also neptunes neptunes
>>>/megu/2679 No.154938
>>154896So glad I decided to go with melty Reisen in the original drawing, I love this.
Only you can save her...
No.154939
>>154896Cute udonge (the one on the right).
No.154961
Man, my robowife Yumemi is such a pain to draw but it must be done. It's beyond me how much detail the pros are willing to slap on.
>>154596>>154515Thanks. The legs are a little fucked. I tried to work with perspective a bit too but I'm not very art-smart unfortunately.
>>154896Nature is truly beautiful!
No.154970
>>154938Here you go, the actual drawing. With this, she can be saved… probably.
Ineptitude with skirt frills and boot perspective had me procrastinate for a while.
No.154975
>>>/megu/2681 decade of expose
No.155039
>>>/megu/2685 super marisa!
No.155103
>>155077I like the movement of breasts, dynamism works well with Okuu's personality.